-pt. 3 edit tier—
-_ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining"
-_ "it might matter timelessly" → there are people with AI chops who are PC (/2017/Jan/from-what-ive-tasted-of-desire/)
-_ confusing people and ourselves about what the exact crime is
-_ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
-_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!! ("systematically conflating corruption, accumulation of dominance, and theft, with getting things done")
-_ "your failure to model social reality is believing people when they claim noble motives"
-_ hint at Vanessa being trans
-_ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
-_ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
-_ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing
-_ link to protest flyer
-_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
-_ better explanation of MOPs in "Social Reality" scuffle
-_ better context on "scam" &c. earlier
+pt. 3 edit tier (red team edition)—
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+pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
+✓ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining"
+✓ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
+✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
+✓ hint at "Yes Requires" objector being trans
+✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
+✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
+- nuance and FTX epilogue
+_ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically
+_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
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+_ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
+_ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark