-near editing tier—
-✓ scan through "far editing tier" list and scoot anything applicable to the near editing tier
-✓ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text
-✓ explain the title
-✓ happy price subject line in pt. 1
-✓ incentives of gatekeeping and system-mandated lies
-✓ explain back in the _Overcoming Bias_ era
-✓ smooth out "still had his email" callback
-✓ better summary of Littman
-✓ clarify that I'm not a sex work prohibitionist
-✓ Autoheterosexual as secondary literature
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-_ scan through pt. 1½ and extract highlights to include
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-pt. 1—
-_ say more about why omit pt. 1½
-_ "Margaret" discussion needs to cover the part where I'd cause less disruption if I transitioned
-_ so embarrassed after the Singularity
-_ mention HRT pause / stop in pt. 1 end
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-pt. 2—
-_ explain Michael's gaslighting charge, using the "bowels of Christ" language
-_ the function of privacy norms is to protect you from people who want to selectively reveal information to hurt you, so it makes sense that I'm particularly careful about Yudkowsky's privacy and not Scott's, because I totally am trying to hurt Yudkowsky (this also protects me from the charge that by granting more privacy to Yudkowsky than Scott, I'm implying that Yudkowsky said something more incriminating; the difference in treatment is about _me_ and my expectations, rather than what they may or may not have said when I tried emailing them); I want it to be clear that I'm attacking him but not betraying him
-_ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
-_ Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
-_ "A Hill": I claim that I'm not doing much psychologizing because implausible to be simultaenously savvy enough to say this, and naive enough to not be doing so knowingly
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