poke at pt. 4 prep

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+pt. 4 edit tier—
+✓ "A Fire" § title
+✓ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
+_ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
+_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
+_ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
+_ Tail's objection to FFS example
+_ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments
+_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
+_ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
+_ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
+_ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/
+_ look for a place to link https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
+_ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
+_ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
+_ make sure I'm summarizing "Challenges" appropriately
 
 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
-_ rewrite pt. 4
-_ consult Anna
 ✓ consult Said
-_ publish pt. 4
+✓ patriate-links script TODOs
+- remaining pt. 4 edit tier
+- draft #drama strategy opening remarks
+_ consult Anna
+_ draft Twitter thread
+_ #drama strategy session
+_ bully Jeff Ladish
+_ PUBLISH pt. 4!!
 
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@@ -16,27 +37,11 @@ _ apply pro edit pt. 5
 
 ✓ consult Tail
 
-_ bully Jeff Ladish
-_ #drama strategy session
 
 _ consult lc
 _ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
 
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-pt. 4 edit tier—
-_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
-_ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
-_ look for a place to link "Faction formation"
-_ Tail's objection to FFS example
-_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
-_ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
-_ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
-_ https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
-_ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
-_ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
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 pt. 5 edit tier—
 ✓ sucking Scott's dick is helpful because he's now the main gateway instead of HPMOR
 _ Previously-on summary
@@ -1353,6 +1358,8 @@ Still citing it (19 Sep 22): https://twitter.com/ingalala/status/156839169106472
 https://arbital.greaterwrong.com/p/logical_dt/?l=5gc
 It even leaked into Big Yud!!! "Counterfactuals were made for humanity, not humanity for counterfactuals."
 
+Still citing it (13 Feb 24): https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/kSq5qiafd6SqQoJWv/technologies-and-terminology-ai-isn-t-software-it-s-deepware
+
 At least I don't have to link the rebuttal myself every time:
 https://www.datasecretslox.com/index.php/topic,1553.msg38755.html
 https://old.reddit.com/r/slatestarcodex/comments/10vx6gk/the_categories_were_made_for_man_not_man_for_the/j7k8fjc/