memoir: molasses pokes at pt. 4 continue

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 pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ "A Fire" § title
+✓ make sure I'm summarizing "policy debates" moral from "Challenges"
 ✓ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
-_ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
-_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
+✓ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
 _ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
 _ Tail's objection to FFS example
 _ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments
-_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
-_ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/
-_ look for a place to link https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
+_ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/discursive-warfare-and-faction-formation/
+_ parenthetical defending literal fraud?
+-----
+requires net—
+_ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
+_ Stephen Jay Gould
 _ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
-_ make sure I'm summarizing "Challenges" appropriately
+
 
 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ consult Said
 ✓ patriate-links script TODOs
 - remaining pt. 4 edit tier
 - draft #drama strategy opening remarks
-_ consult Anna
-_ draft Twitter thread
+- consult Anna
 _ #drama strategy session
+_ draft Twitter thread
+_ consult lc?
 _ bully Jeff Ladish
 _ PUBLISH pt. 4!!
 
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 ✓ consult Tail
 
 
-_ consult lc
 _ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
 
@@ -2831,3 +2834,6 @@ https://scholars-stage.org/public-intellectuals-have-short-shelf-lives-but-why/
 
 > "Racism" is so commonly used weirdly that I think there are few circumstances left where I'd try to use the word to communicate.  Instead I'd say, "X seems to be judging people negatively in a hard-to-shake-off way based on their skin color."
 https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1755624226550387013
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+> "Study science, not just me!" is probably the most important piece of advice Ayn Rand should've given her followers and didn't.  There's no one human being who ever lived, whose shoulders were broad enough to bear all the weight of a true science with many contributors.
+https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/96TBXaHwLbFyeAxrg/guardians-of-ayn-rand