-first edit pass bookmark: "seemed to accept this as an inevitable background"
+first edit pass bookmark: "I received a Twitter DM from"
blocks to fit somewhere—
_ the hill he wants to die on (conclusion for "Zevi's Choice"??)
✓ cut words from the "Yes Requires" slapfight?
✓ cut words from "Social Reality" scuffle
✓ examples of "bitter and insulting" comments about rationalists
-- Scott got comas right in the same year as "Categories"
+✓ Scott got comas right in the same year as "Categories"
+✓ "I" statements
+✓ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky thinks of himself
+✓ cut words from December 2019 blogging spree
+✓ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
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_ Ben on "locally coherent coordination": use direct quotes for Ben's language—maybe rewrite in my own language (footnote?) as an understanding test
_ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
_ establish usage of "coordination group" vs. "posse"?
_ LessWrong vs. GreaterWrong for comment links?
_ cut words from descriptions of other posts! (if people want to read them, they can click through ... but on review, these descriptions seem pretty reasonable?)
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-_ cut words from NRx denouncement Jessica discussion
-_ later thoughts on jump to evaluation, translating between different groups' language
+_ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it) (but it still seems clear to me on re-read?)
+_ I still mostly feel like being more detailed than "fraud"; later thoughts on jump to evaluation, translating between different groups' language
+_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!!
_ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/
-_ "I" statements
-_ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky _thinks of himself_ as having given up on Speech _in those words_"
-_ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it)
-_ cut lots of words from December 2019 blogging spree
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_ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
_ choice quotes in "end of the Category War" thank you note
_ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
_ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing
-_ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
_ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
_ first mention of Jack G. should introduce him properly
things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
_ Anna on Paul Graham
-_ compression of Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
+_ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
_ Michael's SLAPP against REACH
_ Michael on creepy and crazy men
_ elided Sasha disaster
_ Ray
_ Ruby
_ Teortaxes? (he might be interested)
+_ Alicorner #drama ("Is anyone interested in offering political advice or 'hostile advice'")
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