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 ✓ "A Fire" § title
 ✓ make sure I'm summarizing "policy debates" moral from "Challenges"
 ✓ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
-- footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
-_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
+✓ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
 _ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
 _ Tail's objection to FFS example
 _ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments
@@ -11,8 +10,7 @@ _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
 _ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/discursive-warfare-and-faction-formation/
 _ parenthetical defending literal fraud?
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+_ link https://thingofthings.substack.com/p/why-callout-posts-often-include-trivial
 _ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
 _ Stephen Jay Gould