_ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
+people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
+_ Tail (AGP discussion)
+_ "Thomas" (privacy negotiations)
+_ Anna
+_ "Noreen"
+_ "Bill"
+_ "Rebecca" (pseudonym choice)
+_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link
+_ hostile prereader (first-choice: April)
+_ professional editor
+_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation)
+_ Ben/Jessica (Michael)
+
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "With the caveated understanding"
+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "Besides writing to tell everyone else about it"
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