-TODO finish before I can vet and ship pt.s 1–3
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-✓ "People ..." introduction
-✓ finish existing 5150 scene scraps
-✓ CCRMC facility note
-✓ footnote about telephone game of "self present"
-✓ interacting with the outpatient program
-✓ Vassar discourse I
-✓ community health check
-✓ Vassar discourse II
-✓ ordering DIY hormones
-✓ asking Anna for promise
-✓ Vassar discourse III
-✓ proposed credit-assignment ritual
-✓ emailing Blanchard/Bailey/Hsu/Lawrence/Cantor/Dreger
-✓ tie-off
-✓ "Roberta" situation
-_ overheating in April, staying at Volterra, Hamilton purchase
-_ BABSCon
-_ "my call with Western Psychiatric's Manager of Patient Relations"
-_ final credit assignment ritual
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-_ phenotypic capture and memetic identity (insert into pt. 1)
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-pre-edit phase—
-_ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods"
-_ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
-_ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
+_ "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "")
near editing tier—
-_ link Crossdreamers (at the same time I say it's not about the clothes, to help make sense of the title)
+_ explain the title
_ so embarrassed after the Singularity
-_ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"?
_ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
_ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
_ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
-_ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up
+_ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text
_ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April)
-_ professional editor?
+- professional editor
+Needed for pt. 1-2—
+- "Thomas"
_ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
-- "Thomas" [blanket]
+_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3]
+_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
_ Anna [blanket]
-_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket]
-_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket]
_ Scott [blanket]
-_ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
-_ "Bill" [blanket]
-_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
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-_ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]
+_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
+_ "Bill" [pt. 3-]
_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
_ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
-_ Lex [pt. 2]
_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "In a Facebook thread"
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_ "Lenore" psychiatric disaster
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With internet available—
+_ define ersatz
_ link to my Facebook post for Coming Out Day
_ "All You Zombies"
_ links to PA hospitals
me—
> It looks like my social circle. (This is why I'm worried about suboptimal social norms getting locked in for the wrong reasons—what's fashionable in Berkeley in year X is likely to be mainstream in year X+20.)
-in the hotel room, Michael got up to go to the bathroom, I thought the noise was specifically timed to prevent me from hearing something that I shouldn't
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[something perfectly innocent about math and dolphins](https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/esRZaPXSHgWzyB2NL/where-to-draw-the-boundaries) that wouldn't have seemed remotely controversial in 2009, and therefore, by [Noether's theorem](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Noether%27s_theorem#Time_invariance), can't be remotely controversial in 2019
The fact that I ghosted on music lessons from "Tricky" for being nonbinary, is an example of phenotypic capture ruining everything
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+https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1668419201101615105
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+> As usual, I got there first and solved the relatively easy philosophy problems, so the sensible people have nothing to talk about, and the unsensible ones can't just use my answer sheet.
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+(I thought about apologizing if some of the content was "weird" or offensive, but I figured if you've been a professional editor for 15 years and list memoirs as a specialty, you've probably seen everything.)
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