-- "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "The language I spoke was")
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near editing tier—
_ explain Michael's gaslighting charge, using the "bowels of Christ" language
_ explain the title
_ pt. 1 end should summarize missing part a little more
_ pt. 1 end needs to mention BABSCon (back referenced)
_ happy price subject line in pt. 1
+_ incentives of gatekeeping and system-mandated lies
+_ "Margaret" discussion needs to cover the part where I'd cause less disruption if I transitioned
people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
-_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April, )
+sent, need approval for pt. 1-2—
+_ hostile prereader, maybe?? (first-choice: April)
- professional editor
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-Needed for pt. 1-2—
+✓ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+✓ Anna
+- "Riley"
- "Thomas"
- Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
-- Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
- "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
+- Scott
-to send—
-_ "Bill" [pt. 2-]
-_ Scott [blanket]
+to send (Discord)—
+_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2]
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+to write—
_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-2]
_ Sophia [pt. 1]
-_ Anna [blanket]
-_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2]
-_ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
+_ "Margaret"
_ example of "steelman before criticize" norm
_ explain mods protect-feelings
_ explain MOPs better
-_ also had back-and-forth with "Noreen" on 8 Feb in Rob's thread!!
_ Motta-Mena and Puts probability-of-gynephilia-by-intersex-condition graph, re trans kids on the margin
-_ "Noreen" discussion needs to cover the part where I'd cause less disruption if I transitioned
-_ "Noreen"'s girlfriend definitely needs to be mentioned
_ get exact dates and correct Sequencing on late 2016 conversations
_ mention Michael's influence and South Park recs in late 2016?
_ probably give Amelia as pseudonym?
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