pronoun glitch (on person! not gender! so it's OK)

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@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ My insufficiently-requited love coughs nervously to break the awkward silence as
 
 She's about to speak, but gets interrupted by the cell's Alexa. "Shu!" it shrills. "2231 Shu J! Room 101!"
 
-Shu appears to be a young Asian wom—no, you can't see her—their—pronoun badge at this angle. That kind of cisnormative perception, detectable through facial-expression microanalysis, is why I'm here.
+Shu appears to be a young Asian wom—no, I can't see her—their—pronoun badge at this angle. That kind of cisnormative perception, detectable through facial-expression microanalysis, is why I'm here.
 
 Well, that and the blog. On reflection, probably mostly the blog.