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@@ -10,7 +10,9 @@ Now this is a story all about how
 My life got flipped-turned upside down  
 And I'd like to take a minute  
 Just sit right there  
-I'll tell you how I became convinced that I share the same underlying psychological variation that motivates males like me to become lesbian trans women, but am disturbed , and 
+I'll tell you how I became convinced that I share the same underlying psychological variation that motivates males like me to become lesbian trans women, but have been disturbed by cultural forces that are exhorting people to interpret the variation as some kind of intrinsic female gender identity
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 (If [almost](http://unremediatedgender.space/2016/Dec/anne-lawrence-is-the-only-honest-human-wip/) everyone is lying to me about autogynephilia, maybe they're _also_ lying about whether humans actually need to sleep!)