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 Title: Grim Trigger; Or, the Parable of the Honest Man and the God of Marketing
 Date: 2020-01-01 
-Category: other
+Category: fiction
 Tags: cathartic
 Status: draft
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ And he climbed for three days and three nights to the peak of Mt. Meem, where th
 
 And the honest man stared at the God of Marketing, and the God of Marketing stared back.
 
-And he drew a silver wistle from his pocket. And he raised the whistle to his lips.
+And the honest man drew a silver wistle from his pocket. And he raised the whistle to his lips.
 
 And the God of Marketing said, "You wouldn't."
 
@@ -64,8 +64,6 @@ In the mountains! "Defect!"
 
 In the valley! "Defect!"
 
-In the alleyways of the capital city! "Defect!"
-
 On the road to the provinces, fleeing an angry mob wielding pitchforks, torches, and the occasional brick! "Defect!"
 
 Mashing the big red button on a remote detonator! "_Defect defect defect defect defect!_"