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 "... you're serious."
 
-"I'm not saying you did anything _wrong_ by saying 'Italian food'; I understand that there are cultural and historical reasons that people tend to habitually associate foods with countries. You didn't think it through, and that's OK. However, now that I've done the interpretive labor of pointing out that it's unnecessary, you have no good reasons to _persist_ in saying 'Italian food' in this context, given the externality it imposes."
+"I'm not saying you did anything _wrong_ by saying 'Italian food'; I understand that there are cultural and historical reasons that people tend to habitually associate foods with countries. You didn't take the extra time to think it through, and that's OK. However, now that I've done the interpretive labor of pointing out that it's unnecessary, you have no good reasons to _persist_ in saying 'Italian food' in this context, given the externality it imposes."