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 _(a stray observation [from December 2016](/2016/Dec/joined/#reading-the-janet-mock-autobiography))_
 
-Janet Mock's autobiography _Redefining Realness: My Path to Womanhood, Identity, Love, & So Much More_ is an interesting example of an HSTS telling her story while adhering very strictly to the 2014 mainstream-trans-identity-politics party line about how all this works ("gender identity", sex "assigned at birth", _&c_.). I found myself wondering: does she ... not know the secret??
+Janet Mock's autobiography _Redefining Realness: My Path to Womanhood, Identity, Love, & So Much More_ is an interesting example of an HSTS telling her story while adhering very strictly to the 2014 mainstream-trans-identity-politics party line about how all this works ("gender identity", sex "assigned at birth", _&c_.). I found myself wondering: does she ... not know [the secret](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blanchard%27s_transsexualism_typology)??
 
-(Or, you know, the story that [makes _so much more sense_ than "gender identity" as a first approximation, even if the underlying reality is doubtlessly more complicated than that](/2022/Jul/the-two-type-taxonomy-is-a-useful-approximation-for-a-more-detailed-causal-model/).)
+(Or, you know, the story that [makes _so much more sense_ than "gender identity" as a first approximation, even if the underlying reality is going to be more complicated than that](/2022/Jul/the-two-type-taxonomy-is-a-useful-approximation-for-a-more-detailed-causal-model/).)
 
 Then we get this: