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 > —_Quarantine_ by Greg Egan
 
-People who are concerned with social justice tend to be rightfully skeptical when privileged straight white men like me complain about identity politics. That's why, when the topic is misogyny or racism, I _shut up_—even if I might occasionally privately _think_ I might have something true and relevant to say about the costs of the culture of the political left teaching people to model themselves as helpless victims of a kyriarchical society, I also realize that _my opinion doesn't matter_. I'm not a woman or a racial minority; I don't have their lived experience; I _don't know what it's like_ to face the challenges they face. I don't have standing to speak.
+People who are concerned with social justice tend to be rightfully skeptical when privileged straight white men like me complain about identity politics. That's why, when the topic is misogyny or racism, I generally _shut up_—even if I might occasionally privately _think_ I might have something true and relevant to say about the costs of the culture of the political left teaching people to model themselves as helpless victims of a kyriarchical society, I also realize that _my opinion doesn't matter_. I'm not a woman or a racial minority; I don't have their lived experience; I _don't know what it's like_ to face the challenges they face. I don't have standing to speak.
 
 But social progress marches on, and as old grievances recede into the mists of history, new ones take their place, and when the day comes to pass that the designated victim group of our age is _straight boys who wish they were girls_, then suddenly, _I have standing_. Girl, do _I have standing!_ And I will put an _end_ to this _toxic bullshit_, because I am nobody's victim.
 
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ An interesting blog post titled ["I Am A Transwoman. I Am In The Closet. I Am No
 
 _Yes_. Yes, I went there. Yes, I know how [offensive]() that is. But I have a point to make.
 
-In this post, the author describes his stuggles with gender dysphoria: ever since childhood, he's desperately wished to be a girl, and 
+In this post, the author describes his stuggles with gender dysphoria: ever since childhood, he's wanted to be a girl, 
 
 
 He _said_ he's not planning to transition. He said it in the title!