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@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@ _ giving up on him, don't want to waste any more time, last email
 
 
 With internet available—
+_ elaborate on why I'm not leaking sensitive bits, by explaining what can be inferred by what was and wasn't said in public
 _ what is the dictionary definition of _gestalt_ (maybe link it?)
 _ better examples from "Yes Requires the Possibility of No"
 _ my comment about having changed my mind about "A Fable of Science and Politics"
@@ -25,6 +26,7 @@ _ dath ilan conspiracy references
 
 
 far editing tier—
+_ footnote to explain why I always include the year with the month even though it could be inferred from context
 _ make sure to quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy before calling back to it
 _ tie off Anna's plot arc?
 _ explain earlier that my practice of "throw money at things" also applied to my friendship with Anna
@@ -76,6 +78,7 @@ _ Ben/Jessica
 _ Scott
 _ Anna
 _ secret posse member
+_ Katie (pseudonym choice)
 _ Alicorn: about privacy, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link
 _ someone from Alicorner #drama as a hostile prereader (Swimmer?)
 _ maybe Kelsey (very briefly, just about her name)?