memoir: finish draft § on "tossed in a Bucket" ambiguity

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 far editing tier—
 _ rephrase "gamete size" discussion to make it clearer that Yudkowsky's proposal also implicitly requires people to be agree about the clustering thing
+_ smoother transition between "deliberately ambiguous" and "was playing dumb"; I'm not being paranoid for attributing political motives to him, because he told us that he's doing it
 _ I'm sure Eliezer Yudkowsky could think of some relevant differences
 _ clarify why Michael thought Scott was "gaslighting" me, include "beeseech bowels of Christ"
 _ conversation with Ben about physical injuries (this is important because it explains where the "cut my dick off rhetoric" came from)