memoir: finish draft § on "tossed in a Bucket" ambiguity

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-noncontiguous on deck—
-✓ being put in a bucket (school)
-- "Actually, I was just crazy the whole time"
-- "duly appreciated"
-- Doublethink (Choosing to be Biased)
-_ the reason he got pushback
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-_ if he's reading this
-_ tie off reply to Xu
-_ let's recap 
-_ help from Jessica for "Unnatural Categories"
-_ bridge to "Challenges"
-_ Christmas party 2019 and state of Church leadership
-_ look at email log again for outlining 2019
-_ Anna vs. Michael factional conflict
-_ "fraud" as deception that moves resources
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 with internet available—
 _ examples of snarky comments about "the rationalists" 
 _ Discord logs before Austin retreat
@@ -27,6 +8,8 @@ _ weirdly hostile comments on "... Boundaries?"
 
 
 far editing tier—
+_ rephrase "gamete size" discussion to make it clearer that Yudkowsky's proposal also implicitly requires people to be agree about the clustering thing
+_ smoother transition between "deliberately ambiguous" and "was playing dumb"; I'm not being paranoid for attributing political motives to him, because he told us that he's doing it
 _ I'm sure Eliezer Yudkowsky could think of some relevant differences
 _ clarify why Michael thought Scott was "gaslighting" me, include "beeseech bowels of Christ"
 _ conversation with Ben about physical injuries (this is important because it explains where the "cut my dick off rhetoric" came from)