draft "Worldbuilding": problems with STR criterion, remaining TODO grafs

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 Anyway, the occasion for messaging you today is that you might be a good test audience for this one: is this draft falling into the "allying with terrible positions out of contrarianism" failure mode?
 
-my _guess_ is (and I'm writing this post to argue that) that you being drafted into the army actually _would_ be worse (for you, and for the army) from our englighted Bayesian humanist perspective than it would be for a male who was otherwise personality-matched and strength-matched, for real, and not just as edgy right-wing anti-virtue signaling
+I'm arguing that you being drafted into the army actually _would_ be worse (for you, and for the army) from our englighted Bayesian transhumanist perspective than it would be for a male who was otherwise personality-matched and strength-matched—for real, and not just as edgy right-wing anti-virtue signaling
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 but you might know reasons my guess is wrong