poke at pt. 4 prep

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 pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ "A Fire" § title
-_ revise the start of §6 to say he came by core pronoun stance honestly
-_ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
-_ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous
+✓ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
+_ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
 _ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
 _ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
-_ revise start of §6 to say that
-_ look for a place to link "Faction formation"
 _ Tail's objection to FFS example
 _ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments
 _ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
-_ https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
+_ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/
+_ look for a place to link https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
 _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
 _ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
+_ make sure I'm summarizing "Challenges" appropriately
 
 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ consult Said
 ✓ patriate-links script TODOs
-_ remaining pt. 4 edit tier
-_ draft Twitter thread
-_ draft #drama strategy comments
+- remaining pt. 4 edit tier
+- draft #drama strategy opening remarks
 _ consult Anna
+_ draft Twitter thread
 _ #drama strategy session
 _ bully Jeff Ladish
 _ PUBLISH pt. 4!!
@@ -1359,6 +1358,8 @@ Still citing it (19 Sep 22): https://twitter.com/ingalala/status/156839169106472
 https://arbital.greaterwrong.com/p/logical_dt/?l=5gc
 It even leaked into Big Yud!!! "Counterfactuals were made for humanity, not humanity for counterfactuals."
 
+Still citing it (13 Feb 24): https://www.lesswrong.com/posts/kSq5qiafd6SqQoJWv/technologies-and-terminology-ai-isn-t-software-it-s-deepware
+
 At least I don't have to link the rebuttal myself every time:
 https://www.datasecretslox.com/index.php/topic,1553.msg38755.html
 https://old.reddit.com/r/slatestarcodex/comments/10vx6gk/the_categories_were_made_for_man_not_man_for_the/j7k8fjc/