memoir: molasses pokes at pt. 4 continue

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 ✓ "A Fire" § title
 ✓ make sure I'm summarizing "policy debates" moral from "Challenges"
 ✓ revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
-- footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
-_ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
+✓ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
 _ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
 _ Tail's objection to FFS example
 _ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments