pt. 4 edits from an incomplete day

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 pt. 4 edit tier—
 ✓ "A Fire" § title
+✓ make sure I'm summarizing "policy debates" moral from "Challenges"
 - revise "too good a writer" to be more explicit "someone could be that naive"
-_ make sure I'm summarizing "policy debates" moral from "Challenges"
 _ footnote about how I could be blamed for being too credulous?
 _ say that explicitly, up front, at the start of that … chunk.
 _ edit post to clarify "nudging the cognition"
@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@ _ Brennan "everyone else should participate" needs more wording adjustments
 _ the mailing list post noted it as a "common sexual fantasy"
 _ Sept. 2020 clarification noted that a distinction should be made between
 _ emphasize that 2018 thread was policing TERF-like pronoun usage, not just disapproving of gender-based pronouns
-_ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/
-_ look for a place to link https://cognition.cafe/p/on-lies-and-liars
+_ look for a place to link http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/discursive-warfare-and-faction-formation/
 _ cite more sneers; use a footnote to pack in as many as possible
+_ Stephen Jay Gould
 _ Dawkins and Jerry Coyne and https://www.thefp.com/p/carole-hooven-why-i-left-harvard
-_ parenthetical defending literal fraud
+_ parenthetical defending literal fraud?
 
 time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ consult Said
@@ -24,6 +24,7 @@ time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 _ consult Anna
 _ #drama strategy session
 _ draft Twitter thread
+_ consult lc?
 _ bully Jeff Ladish
 _ PUBLISH pt. 4!!
 
@@ -39,7 +40,6 @@ _ apply pro edit pt. 5
 ✓ consult Tail
 
 
-_ consult lc
 _ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc