memoir editing sweep ...

[Ultimately_Untrue_Thought.git] / notes / memoir-sections.md

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@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ TODO finish before I can vet and ship pt.s 1–3
 ✓ finish existing 5150 scene scraps
 ✓ CCRMC facility note
 ✓ footnote about telephone game of "self present"
-- interacting with the outpatient program
-_ Vassar discourse
+✓ interacting with the outpatient program
+- Vassar discourse
 _ emailing Blanchard/Bailey/Hsu/Lawrence/Cantor
 _ footnote about "density of outright falsehoods"
 _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
@@ -19,6 +19,10 @@ _ chat transcript relevant to War on Optimization for Generalized Secrecy
 _ final credit assignment ritual
 _ "Lenore" psychiatric disaster (not in pt.s 1–3, but I want this drafted before I hit Ben and Jessica)
 
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+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "With the caveated understanding"
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 - Eliezerfic fight conclusion
@@ -46,6 +50,7 @@ _ remaining Feb./Apr. 2017 recent madness
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 With internet available—
+_ accuracy/spelling of "Moloch, the god of Carthagean myth"
 _ sluggish schizophrenia
 _ "mononymic aura" link to Yudkowsky on "aura of destiny"?
 _ when were Meeker Four out on bail? how long would they otherwise be held?