_ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
_ first mention of Jack G. should introduce him properly
+_ link to protest flyer
+_ weird that Kelsey thought the issue was that we were trying to get Yudkowsky to make a statement, which he never does; from our perspective, the issue was that he _had_ made a statement, and it was wrong
pt. 4 edit tier—
_ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)