memoir: some fine details to the parts about "Helen" and Sophia

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@@ -20,6 +20,12 @@ marked TODO blocks—
 ✓ Rob's thread, first contact with Ben [pt. 2]
 ✓ A/a alumna consult details [pt. 2]
 
+✓ touch up Persongen explanation [pt. 2]
+✓ touch up "Helen" key photo explanation
+_ explain date with "Noreen"
+_ October 11th posts
+_ explain fight with "Noreen" et al.
+
 - Eliezerfic fight: Big Yud tests me [pt. 6]
 _ Eliezerfic fight: derail with lintamande [pt. 6]
 _ Eliezerfic fight: knives, and showing myself out [pt. 6]
@@ -118,7 +124,8 @@ _ Anna's claim that Scott was a target specifically because he was good, my coun
 _ Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
 
 far editing tier—
-_ facet/residual Persongen explanation could use some work
+_ didn't "Helen" also send me $8 for the key, and the bank statement had her deadname on it?
+_ re Persongen, footnote or sentences about how I knew I was wrong to use naïve-Bayes on facets, but I didn't know what was right
 _ squeeze "Darkness and Light" into the Eliezerfic account
 _ clarify Sarah dropping out of the coordination group
 _ somewhere in dath ilan discussion: putting a wrapper on graphic porn is fine, de-listing Wikipedia articles is not