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@@ -8,17 +8,20 @@ time-sensitive globals TODOs—
 ✓ clear with Alicorn
 ✓ fill in needed pt. 4 sections
 ✓ send pt. 4 to editors
+✓ clear with Kelsey
+✓ rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
+✓ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
+✓ Kelsey won't elaborate on statutes of limitations
+- clear with Steven
+- consult Anna
+- finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
+✓ revise gender section
+
+_ revise FTX footnote
 
-- rephrase "everyone-yelling operation" in pt. 5
-_ rephrase "trans kids on the margin" section: https://luminousalicorn.tumblr.com/post/702114588699820032/what-exactly-are-the-tell-tale-signs-of-a-3-year
 _ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
-_ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
 
-_ consult Anna
-_ clear with Steven
-_ clear with Kelsey
-_ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
-_ consult Said
+- consult Said
 _ clear with Ray
 _ clear with Ruby
 
@@ -36,6 +39,14 @@ _ solicit pro edit pt. 5
 _ apply red team pt. 5
 _ apply pro edit pt. 5
 
+✓ consult Tail
+
+_ bully Jeff Ladish
+_ #drama strategy session
+
+_ Manifold: Will Yudkowsky reply to "Agreeing With Stalin in Ways That Exhibit Generally Rationalist Principles" in a way that a 2008 Overcoming Bias reader would consider non-evasive, as judged by Vaniver?
+
+_ ask Jimrandomh about attack times
 _ consult lc
 _ consult David Xu
 _ psychiatric disaster private doc
@@ -57,7 +68,7 @@ pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
 ✓ re-check wording of trans-kids-on-the-margin section
 _ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage in footnote?
 _ "consensus behavior" anti-school complaint could be stronger
-----
+-------
 _ Ruby fight included ban threat, "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
 _ breakup song
 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
@@ -141,19 +152,18 @@ _ "List of Lethalities" mentioning quantilizers + https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsk
 _ screenshot Xu thread
 
 
-things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
-_ Anna on Paul Graham
-_ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
-_ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight), or calling Ruby a MOP
-_ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
-_ footnote about FTX
-_ revision of "yelling" description
-_ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
-_ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
-_ elided Sasha disaster (new)
-_ what should I say to Iceman? https://twitter.com/satisfiesvalues/status/1730025195413410129
-_ reached out to Garrison Lovely
-
+Vassar et al.—
+✓ "What You Can't Say"
+✓ reached out to Garrison Lovely
+✓ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)
+✓ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
+✓ elided Sasha disaster (new)
+✓ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
+✓ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
+✓ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight), or calling Ruby a MOP
+✓ what should I say to Iceman? https://twitter.com/satisfiesvalues/status/1730025195413410129
+✓ footnote about FTX
+✓ revision of "yelling" description
 
 
 pt. 3–5 prereaders—