memoir: editing sweep ...

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@@ -28,31 +28,33 @@ _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
 _ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
 
 near editing tier—
-_ "maximize the number of trans ppl" conversation should briefly sample the guy's bogus conjunction of arguments
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
 _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
-_ explain who Michael Bailey is earlier
 
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
-_ Tail (AGP discussion)
-_ "Thomas" (privacy negotiations)
-_ Anna
-_ "Noreen"
-_ "Bill"
-_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice)
-_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link
-_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation)
-_ Ben/Jessica (Michael)
-_ Scott
-_ Lex
-_ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?)
-_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April)
+_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
 _ professional editor?
 
+_ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+_ "Thomas" [blanket]
+_ Anna [blanket]
+_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket]
+_ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket]
+_ Scott [blanket]
+_ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
+_ "Bill" [blanket]
+_ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
+
+_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
+_ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
+_ Lex [pt. 2]
+_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
+
+
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "At this point, any _normal people_"
+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "A trans woman named Sophia"
 
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@@ -76,7 +78,10 @@ _ Dolphin War finish
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 With internet available—
-_ Trump and Brexit and the summer of George Floyd
+_ link specifically to Sophia's comment on "Wicked Transcendence"
+_ "(to some controversy)" link
+_ what is an "encyclical"
+_ Trump and Brexit and the summer of George Floyd link?
 _ links to PA hospitals
 _ link to my Facebook posts on Azkaban, prematuring conceding the bet, and correcting the bet record
 _ Scott on "right to waive your rights" and wrongful committment