✓ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
pt. 3 content fills—
-_ the skeptical family friend's view
-_ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
+✓ the skeptical family friend's view
+✓ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
+_ confusing people and ourselves about what the exact crime is
_ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
-_ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
-_ I still mostly feel like being more detailed than "fraud"; later thoughts on jump to evaluation, translating between different groups' language
_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!!
pt. 3 minor—
+✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
_ Ben on "locally coherent coordination": use direct quotes for Ben's language—maybe rewrite in my own language (footnote?) as an understanding test
_ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
_ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing