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diff --git a/notes/memoir-sections.md b/notes/memoir-sections.md
index 496611e..67db4c9 100644 (file)
--- a/notes/memoir-sections.md
+++ b/notes/memoir-sections.md
@@ -28,6 +28,8 @@ _ security code drama?? ("Although, speaking of documenting" 2 March)
 _ integrate 5150 scene scraps into a coherent section
 
 near editing tier—
+_ link Crossdreamers (at the same time I say it's not about the clothes, to help make sense of the title)
+_ so embarrassed after the Singularity
 _ "Patient's Rights" or "Patients' Rights"?
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
@@ -35,12 +37,13 @@ _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems li
 _ mention flying to Pittsburgh had been brought up
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 
+
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
 _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
 _ professional editor?
 
 _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
-_ "Thomas" [blanket]
+- "Thomas" [blanket]
 _ Anna [blanket]
 _ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [blanket]
 _ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [blanket]
@@ -49,7 +52,7 @@ _ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
 _ "Bill" [blanket]
 _ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
 
-_ "Roberta" [pt. 2]
+_ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
 _ Lex [pt. 2]
@@ -58,7 +61,7 @@ _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
 
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-from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "A trans woman named Sophia"
+from the top editing session— bookmark phrase "In a Facebook thread"
 
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