memoir: pt. 2 homestretch tweaks

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 pt. 2 near editing tier—
-_ alphabet bump
-_ Ziz and Gwen archive
-_ Ziz chocolate anecdote
-_ explain Michael's gaslighting charge, using the "bowels of Christ" language
-_ the function of privacy norms is to protect you from people who want to selectively reveal information to hurt you, so it makes sense that I'm particularly careful about Yudkowsky's privacy and not Scott's, because I totally am trying to hurt Yudkowsky (this also protects me from the charge that by granting more privacy to Yudkowsky than Scott, I'm implying that Yudkowsky said something more incriminating; the difference in treatment is about _me_ and my expectations, rather than what they may or may not have said when I tried emailing them); I want it to be clear that I'm attacking him but not betraying him
-_ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
-_ Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
-_ I claim that I'm not doing much psychologizing because implausible to be simultaenously savvy enough to say this, and naive enough to not be doing so knowingly
+✓ alphabet bump
+✓ Ziz and Gwen archive
+✓ explain Michael's gaslighting charge
+✓ attacking him but not betraying him
+✓ Ziz chocolate anecdote/history
+✓ I claim that I'm not doing much psychologizing because implausible to be simultaenously savvy enough to say this, and naive enough to not be doing so knowingly
 
 
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