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 ✓ quote Yudkowsky's LW moderation policy
 ✓ hint at "Yes Requires" objector being trans
 ✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
+✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
 - nuance and FTX epilogue
-_ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
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 _ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
 _ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage
@@ -58,6 +58,7 @@ _ "Density in Thingspace" comment in Dolphin War https://www.greaterwrong.com/po
 _ quote specific exchange where I mentioned 10,000 words of philosophy that Scott was wrong—obviously the wrong play
 _ Meghan Murphy got it down to four words
 _ Dolphin War needs more Twitter links: "as Soares pointed out" needs link, "threw an eleven-Tweet tantrum" (probably screenshot), tussling
+_ replace anti-black joke with misogynist joke?
 _ end of voting conversation needs links
 _ can I rewrite to not bury the lede on "intent doesn't matter"?
 _ also reference "No such thing as a tree" in Dolphin War section
@@ -2825,3 +2826,7 @@ That was the part I couldn't understand, the part I couldn't accept.
 The man rewrote had rewritten my personality over the internet. Everything I do, I learned from him. He couldn't be so dense as to not even see the thing we'd been trying to point at. Like, even if he were ultimately to endorse his current strategy, he should do it on purpose rather than on accident! 
 
 (Scott mostly saw it, and had [filed his honorable-discharge paperwork](https://slatestarcodex.com/2019/07/04/some-clarifications-on-rationalist-blogging/). Anna definitely saw it, and she was doing it on purpose.)
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+https://forum.effectivealtruism.org/posts/kuqgJDPF6nfscSZsZ/thread-for-discussing-bostrom-s-email-and-apology?commentId=Z7kyiPAfmtztueFFJ