memoir: "A Hill" edit pass ...

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-_ tie off 
+_ "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "")
 
 near editing tier—
+_ explain the title
 _ so embarrassed after the Singularity
 _ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
 _ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
 _ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
+_ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text
 _ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
 
 
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
 _ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April) 
-_ professional editor?
+- professional editor
 
-Needed for pt. 1—
-- "Thomas" [pt. 1-2]
+Needed for pt. 1-2—
+- "Thomas" 
 _ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
 _ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-3]
 _ Sophia [pt. 1-2]
 _ Anna [blanket]
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-Needed for pt. 2–3—
 _ Scott [blanket]
 _ Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
-_ Divia? (ask if she wants to be mentioned?) [blanket]
 _ "Bill" [pt. 3-]
-_ "Roberta"? [pt. 2]
 _ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2-3]
 _ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
 _ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
 
 
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 _ "Lenore" psychiatric disaster
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 (There had been a moment during my psych imprisonment the other month, when I had noticeable diffculty dialing a phone. I was still a _person_, even when not all of my usual cognitive abilities were online.)
 
 The fact that I ghosted on music lessons from "Tricky" for being nonbinary, is an example of phenotypic capture ruining everything
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+https://twitter.com/ESYudkowsky/status/1668419201101615105
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+> As usual, I got there first and solved the relatively easy philosophy problems, so the sensible people have nothing to talk about, and the unsensible ones can't just use my answer sheet.
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+(I thought about apologizing if some of the content was "weird" or offensive, but I figured if you've been a professional editor for 15 years and list memoirs as a specialty, you've probably seen everything.)