✓ out of patience email
✓ Michael Vassar and the Theory of Optimal Gossip
✓ complicity and friendship
-_ plan to reach out to Rick / Michael on creepy men/crazy men
+✓ plan to reach out to "Ethan"
+_ Michael on creepy men/crazy men
_ State of Steven
_ reaction to Ziz
_ repair pt. 5 dath ilan transition
_ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
_ footnote explaining quibbles? (the first time I tried to write this, I hesitated, not sure if necessary)
_ "it was the same thing here"—most readers are not going to understand what I see as the obvious analogy
+_ first mention of Jack G. should introduce him properly
pt. 4 edit tier—
_ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)