✓ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky thinks of himself
✓ cut words from December 2019 blogging spree
✓ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
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-pt. 3 content fills—
+✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
✓ the skeptical family friend's view
✓ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
+✓ "admit that you are in fact adding a bit of autobiography to the memoir."
+✓ anyone who drives at all
+✓ clarify that can't remember details: "everyone else seemed to agree on things"
+✓ "It's not just talking hypothetically, it is specifically calling a bluff, the point of the hypothetical"
+✓ the history of civil rights
+✓ it's not obvious why you can't recommend "What You Can't Say"
+✓ Ben on "locally coherent coordination" don't unattributedly quote
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+_ "it might matter timelessly" → there are people with AI chops who are PC (/2017/Jan/from-what-ive-tasted-of-desire/)
_ confusing people and ourselves about what the exact crime is
_ footnote explaining quibbles on clarification
-_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!!
+_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!! ("systematically conflating corruption, accumulation of dominance, and theft, with getting things done")
+_ "your failure to model social reality is believing people when they claim noble motives"
+_ hint at Vanessa being trans
-pt. 3 minor—
-✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
-_ Ben on "locally coherent coordination": use direct quotes for Ben's language—maybe rewrite in my own language (footnote?) as an understanding test
_ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
_ maybe I do want to fill in a few more details about the Sasha disaster, conditional on what I end up writing regarding Scott's prosecution?—and conditional on my separate retro email—also the Zolpidem thing
_ link to protest flyer
_ revise and cut words from "bad faith" section since can link to "Assume Bad Faith"
_ cut words from January 2020 Twitter exchange (after war criminal defenses)
_ everyone *who matters* prefers to stay on the good side
+_ if you only say good things about Republican candidates
pt. 5 edit tier—
_ quote specific exchange where I mentioned 10,000 words of philosophy that Scott was wrong—obviously the wrong play
_ objections and replies in dath ilan ancillary
_ kitchen knife section in dath ilan ancillary
+pt. 6 edit tier—
+_ coach suggests, "Arguably this doesn't count as punishment for the same reason we don't say we're "punishing" a rabid animal by euthanizing it: it's not about disincentivizing the behaviour."
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dath ilan ancillary tier—
_ Who are the 9 most important legislators called?
_ collect Earth people sneers