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-- "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "The language I spoke was")
-
 near editing tier—
 _ explain Michael's gaslighting charge, using the "bowels of Christ" language
 _ explain the title
@@ -14,26 +12,28 @@ _ explain back in the _Overcoming Bias_ era
 _ pt. 1 end should summarize missing part a little more
 _ pt. 1 end needs to mention BABSCon (back referenced)
 _ happy price subject line in pt. 1
+_ incentives of gatekeeping and system-mandated lies
 
 
 people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
-_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April, )
+sent, need approval for pt. 1-2—
+_ hostile prereader, maybe?? (first-choice: April)
 - professional editor
-
-Needed for pt. 1-2—
+✓ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+- "Riley"
 - "Thomas"
 - Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
-- Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
 - "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
+- Anna
+- Scott
 
-to send—
-_ "Bill" [pt. 2-]
-_ Scott [blanket]
+to send (Discord)—
+_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2]
+
+to write—
 _ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-2]
 _ Sophia [pt. 1]
-_ Anna [blanket]
-_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2]
-_ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
+_ "Noreen"