memoir: pt. 3 edit sweep ...

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-first edit pass bookmark: "seemed to accept this as an inevitable background"
+first edit pass bookmark: "I also wrote a little post on"
 
 blocks to fit somewhere—
 _ the hill he wants to die on (conclusion for "Zevi's Choice"??)
@@ -15,7 +15,10 @@ pt. 3 edit tier—
 ✓ cut words from the "Yes Requires" slapfight?
 ✓ cut words from "Social Reality" scuffle
 ✓ examples of "bitter and insulting" comments about rationalists
-- Scott got comas right in the same year as "Categories"
+✓ Scott got comas right in the same year as "Categories"
+✓ "I" statements
+✓ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky thinks of himself
+✓ cut words from December 2019 blogging spree
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 _ Ben on "locally coherent coordination": use direct quotes for Ben's language—maybe rewrite in my own language (footnote?) as an understanding test
 _ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
@@ -26,14 +29,11 @@ _ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one o
 _ establish usage of "coordination group" vs. "posse"? 
 _ LessWrong vs. GreaterWrong for comment links?
 _ cut words from descriptions of other posts! (if people want to read them, they can click through ... but on review, these descriptions seem pretty reasonable?)
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-_ cut words from NRx denouncement Jessica discussion
-_ later thoughts on jump to evaluation, translating between different groups' language
+_ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it) (but it still seems clear to me on re-read?)
+_ I still mostly feel like being more detailed than "fraud"; later thoughts on jump to evaluation, translating between different groups' language
+_ FTX validated Ben's view of EA!!
 _ explicitly mention http://benjaminrosshoffman.com/bad-faith-behavior-not-feeling/
-_ "I" statements
-_ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky _thinks of himself_ as having given up on Speech _in those words_"
-_ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it)
-_ cut lots of words from December 2019 blogging spree
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 _ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
 _ choice quotes in "end of the Category War" thank you note
 _ do I have a better identifier than "Vassarite"?
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ _ https://www.greaterwrong.com/posts/vvc2MiZvWgMFaSbhx/book-review-the-bell-curv
 
 things to discuss with Michael/Ben/Jessica—
 _ Anna on Paul Graham
-_ compression of Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
+_ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
 _ Michael's SLAPP against REACH
 _ Michael on creepy and crazy men
 _ elided Sasha disaster
@@ -90,6 +90,7 @@ _ David Xu
 _ Ray
 _ Ruby
 _ Teortaxes? (he might be interested)
+_ Alicorner #drama ("Is anyone interested in offering political advice or 'hostile advice'")
 
 
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