first edit pass bookmark: "I got a chance to talk to"
+time-sensitive globals TODOs—
+- apply pro edits to pt. 3 (waiting on remaining parts)
+- address red team objections to pt. 3
+- address auto edit tier to pt. 3
+_ schedule Friendship Day at Valinor
+_ consult Anna
+_ consult Said
+_ Jessica's dramapost § in pt. 5
+_ consult 93 about Jessica's dramapost §
+_ finish and ship "Reply to Scott on Autogenderphilia"
+_ finish and ship "Hrunkner Unnerby"
+_ psychiatric disaster doc
+_ clear with Michael/Ben/Jessica
+_ clear with Alicorn
+_ clear with Kelsey
+_ clear with Ray
+_ clear with Ruby
+_ SHIP PT. 3!!
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+_ address auto edit tier to pt. 4–5
+_ red team pt. 4–5
+_ pro edit pt. 4–5
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pt. 3 edit tier (red team edition)—
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+✓ extract these kinds of statements of political alignment as concessions
+✓ credibly helpful unsolicited criticism
+✓ male multivariate distribution
+✓ reserve the right to lie
+✓ how to be principled about the ways in which you're dishonest
+✓ I don't think the group of gay men and lesbian
+✓ narcissistic delusions (soften)
+✓ ended up growing out of it (footnote the number?)
+✓ harm I'm theorizing (model of the child)
+✓ might be fictional (reword to not leak info)
pt. 3 edit tier (auto edition)—
✓ footnote on the bad-faith condition on "My Price for Joining"
✓ hint at "Yes Requires" objector being trans
✓ quote Jack on timelines anxiety
✓ clarify "A Lesson is Learned"
-- nuance and FTX epilogue
+- explain the "jump to evaluation" failure
+- FTX
+_ where were all the trans kids 10 years ago?
_ clarify that cheerful price history is with Anna specifically
-_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
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+_ briefly speculate on causes of brain damage (tie in to moderation policy?)
_ being friends with dogs (it's good, but do I have the wordcount budget?)
_ Ruby fight: "forces of blandness want me gone ... stand my ground" remark
_ mention that I was miffed about "Boundaries?" not getting Curated, while one of Euk's animal posts did
_ Anna on Paul Graham
_ Yudkowsky thinking reasoning wasn't useful
_ Jessica brought up race & IQ (she skimmed the previous draft, so I should highlight this)
+_ Ben publish "Discursive Warfare and Faction Formation" doc?
_ FTX and nuance epilogue (new)
_ Michael's SLAPP against REACH (new)
_ Michael on creepy and crazy men (new)