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@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ _ the hill he wants to die on (insert somewhere in "Standing")
 _ Tail vs. Bailey / Davis vs. Yudkowsky analogy (new block somewhere)
 _ mention that "Not Man for the Categories" keeps getting cited
 
-Notes from pt. 3–6 readthrough (post publication of pt. 1–2)—
+Notes from pt. 3 readthrough—
 _ fullname Taylor and Hoffman at start of pt. 3
 _ footnote clarifying that "Riley" and Sarah weren't core members of the group, despite being included on some emails?
 _ be more specific about Ben's anti-EA and Jessica's anti-MIRI things, perhaps in footnotes
@@ -45,6 +45,8 @@ _ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky _thinks of himself
 _ try to clarify Abram's categories view (Michael didn't get it)
 _ cut lots of words from December 2019 blogging spree
 _ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
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+Notes from pt. 4 readthrough—
 _ mention Nick Bostrom email scandal (and his not appearing on the one-sentence CAIS statement)
 _ revise and cut words from "bad faith" section since can link to "Assume Bad Faith"
 _ cut words from January 2020 Twitter exchange (after war criminal defenses)