memoir: pt. 3–4 edits

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-Yudkowsky was not consistently candid in his communications with his followers, hindering their ability to exercise their responsibilities
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+If you only want to read one of the 20K-word posts in this sequence, I'd skip this one and return next week for the part where I explain how Eliezer Yudkowsky has not been consistently candid in his communications with his followers, hindering their ability to exercise their responsibilities.
 
 Post later (can't afford to spend more Twitter time now)—