-✓ fullname Taylor and Hoffman at start of pt. 3
-✓ footnote clarifying that "Riley" and Sarah weren't core members of the group, despite being included on some emails?
-✓ be more specific about Ben's anti-EA and Jessica's anti-MIRI things
-✓ weird that Kelsey thought the issue was that we were trying to get Yudkowsky to make a statement
-✓ set context for Anna on first mention in the post
-✓ more specific on "mostly pretty horrifying" and group conversation with the whole house
-✓ cut words from the "Yes Requires" slapfight?
-✓ cut words from "Social Reality" scuffle
-✓ examples of "bitter and insulting" comments about rationalists
-✓ Scott got comas right in the same year as "Categories"
-✓ "I" statements
-✓ we can go stronger than "I definitely don't think Yudkowsky thinks of himself
-✓ cut words from December 2019 blogging spree
-✓ mention "Darkest Timeline" and Skyrms somewhere
-✓ "Not the Incentives"—rewrite given that I'm not shielding Ray
-✓ the skeptical family friend's view
-✓ in a footnote, defend the "cutting my dick off" rhetorical flourish
-✓ "admit that you are in fact adding a bit of autobiography to the memoir."
-✓ anyone who drives at all
-✓ clarify that can't remember details: "everyone else seemed to agree on things"
-✓ "It's not just talking hypothetically, it is specifically calling a bluff, the point of the hypothetical"
-✓ the history of civil rights
-✓ it's not obvious why you can't recommend "What You Can't Say"
-✓ Ben on "locally coherent coordination" don't unattributedly quote
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