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 Title: Introductions
 Date: 2016-10-19 18:45
 Category: fiction
+Tags: cathartic
 
 "Mark, this is Alexa. Alexa, this is Mark."
 
 "Pleased to meet you," she says.
 
-"Pleased to meet you," I say. "You're very tall," I add awkwardly.
+"Pleased to meet you," I say. "You're very tall," I add.
 
 "Thanks, I get that a lot," she says. "What's your shirt about?"
 
-I look down at myself, to be reminded to my chagrin that today is the day I chose to wear my new custom "LATE-ONSET GENDER DYSPHORIA IN MALES IS NOT AN INTERSEX CONDITION, YOU LYING BASTARDS" T-shirt.
+I look down at myself, to be reminded that today is the day I chose to wear my new custom "LATE-ONSET GENDER DYSPHORIA IN MALES IS NOT AN INTERSEX CONDITION, YOU LYING BASTARDS" T-shirt.
 
 "Oh, that's the name of my favorite rock group," I say. "They're from Canada. You probably haven't heard of them."