- "A Hill" edit sweep (bookmark phrase: "The language I spoke was")
near editing tier—
+_ explain Michael's gaslighting charge, using the "bowels of Christ" language
_ explain the title
_ so embarrassed after the Singularity
_ mention my "trembling hand" history with secrets, not just that I don't like it
-_ NRx explanation should include the "there's only what won" line
_ It's not clear anyone he usually respects was making this mistake; it seems likely that the original thread was subtweeting Eric Weinstein, who was not making this mistake
_ explain that "A Human's Guide to Words" / 37 Ways are the same text
_ Noether's theorem allusion re "... Boundaries?"
_ smooth out "still had his email" callback
_ Caliphate / craft and the community
_ explain back in the _Overcoming Bias_ era
-_ pt.1 end needs to mention BABSCon (back referenced)
+_ pt. 1 end should summarize missing part a little more
+_ pt. 1 end needs to mention BABSCon (back referenced)
+_ happy price subject line in pt. 1
people to consult specifically before pt. 1–3:
-_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April)
+_ hostile prereader? (first-choice: April, )
- professional editor
Needed for pt. 1-2—
- "Thomas"
- Ben/Jessica (Michael) [pt. 2-]
-_ Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+- Tail (AGP discussion) [pt. 1]
+- "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
+
+to send—
+_ "Bill" [pt. 2-]
+_ Scott [blanket]
_ Sarah (name mention, whether to name conversation) [pt. 1-2]
_ Sophia [pt. 1]
_ Anna [blanket]
-_ Scott [blanket]
-_ "Bill" [pt. 2-]
_ Alicorn: briefly, and for Melkor Glowfic reference link [pt. 2]
_ "Noreen" [pt. 2]
-_ "Rebecca" (consent, pseudonym choice) [pt. 2, not before 15 June]
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